Omar Harb

advisor

USEK - Holy spirit University of Kaslik

Lebanon

As an architect and founder of Omar Harb Architects & Associates, my work centers on creating… more

The project demonstrates a clear conceptual intention and a coherent architectural language. The author shows sensitivity toward spatial organization and an understanding of formal composition. The proposal reflects thoughtful engagement with the design brief and an effort to articulate a distinctive identity.

The strengths of the project lie in its overall vision and the ambition of its formal expression. The volumetric composition is assertive and recognizable, and the spatial sequencing suggests an awareness of experiential qualities. There is evidence of structural and functional reasoning, though not fully resolved.

However, certain aspects remain underdeveloped. The relationship between concept and technical resolution could be strengthened, particularly regarding materiality, structural logic, and environmental responsiveness. Some spatial transitions appear schematic rather than fully articulated, and the project would benefit from deeper contextual integration.

Overall, the proposal shows promising architectural maturity and conceptual clarity, yet requires further refinement to reach a higher level of resolution and coherence.

Concept–Detail Alignment
Strengthen the connection between the conceptual narrative and architectural detailing. Demonstrating how the idea translates into structural systems, façade articulation, and material choices would enhance credibility.

Contextual Integration
Develop a clearer response to the surrounding environment—urban, climatic, cultural, or landscape context. The project would benefit from stronger site-specific reasoning.

Spatial Hierarchy & Circulation
Clarify circulation logic and spatial hierarchy. Certain transitions could be better articulated to improve functional efficiency and experiential continuity.

Environmental Strategy
Introduce or refine passive design strategies (orientation, shading, ventilation, daylight optimization). Environmental performance should reinforce, not contradict, the formal expression.

Representation & Communication
Improve clarity of drawings and diagrams. Analytical diagrams explaining structural logic, environmental strategy, and program distribution would elevate the presentation quality.
27.02.2026