Khaled Omar

advisor

https://www.deltauniv.edu.eg/new/

Egypt

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Dear Xinfei Liu,
I am very impressed with the idea of ??your project and your concept of development and solving a problem that has already occurred and the speed of your response to the problem and its solution. Your effort is undeniable and it is very clear in the design and the idea and also the design in general and in general, the project is good, but I think that it was possible to modify the ground and this has become easy nowadays, allowing the addition of more spaces and also making the shape more comfortable in terms of the edge of the city In a simpler form, I hope the next time we design is openness so that change is all around you to serve your project. Another point I want you to be aware of is the size of the site, the outside area and you just did some beautiful landscaping mostly which might be a bit useful so think more and suggest more activities to do also you can add some lightweight structures as shading elements With some simple activities to do.
Another tip is that it is better to use symmetrical colors that can make your project appear more as a dark background or vice versa the colors are darker and the background is light to make the graphics more clear and the presentation comfortable for anyone to look at and with that, I loved your project and thought of developing and solving a problem in the community.
Finally, well done, and good luck.
20.12.2021